Harlequin, thanks for the pictures.
I see the little wire kinks you noted. That might straighten out some over time. I think the original SE manual use to suggest putting some per-tension on the wires before installing.
I also see in the image below, where one stub wire (white wire) where it ends...the plastic bracket is twisted a bit. This skewing being in the matching section might ill-effect the match some. In looking at this plastic bracket in the image below, and the way it is secured to the boom, I would be tempted to add more hose clamps to help keep the wire tension and the wind load from inadvertently moving any of these support brackets.
It is hard to really tell the angles from the photo below, but the whole brass rod matching section does not look perfectly square with the mast/boom bracket. If you look down the boom, front to back, these plastic brackets should be perfectly centered and in-line with the boom from the driven elements to the reflector elements, at 3:00 and 6:00. However, I notice the stub wire brackets on the driven end of the boom
look perfectly 90* degrees apart.
As you can see this matching device is very big and it needs to be well balanced so the matching stub wires are equidistant on both sides of the boom. This is also why the groups of stub wires and brass rods should all be equal to the specs noted for their lengths.
Just something to consider. This image above of the brass rods also looks a little skewed too.
Before you installed everything, did you happen to measure, record, and compare all the like-wire parts to the specs you got in your kit?
Have you sealed the coax exposed ends from the weather and water yet?
If everything was nice and tight...give your new beam a little time and it may settle down after some time blowing around in the wind,
or maybe not...if something was left a little loose and little parts can move around a bit.
Did your kit come with two wires for the radiator, one long (3/4 wavelength) and one short wire (1/4 wavelength)?
How is your buddy coming along with his L2?
Good luck and keep us posted on your progress.