The vast bulk of SSB audio-quality trouble I see on transmit boils down to two errors.
1) Bias set too low on driver or finals.
2) Missing TR32, removed to improve the AM modulated power level. You'll have to put back TR32 to run sideband without having to "play" the mike gain like a violin.
Next-most common would be to find the ALC trimpot VR12 and see if it's just set too high. SSB is different from AM. Setting the SSB limiter (ALC) too high doesn't make it louder like AM. Just makes it nasty.
Quick way to settle the "bias" versus "limiter" question is to listen on a second radio, and turn the mike gain down. Set it for about 1 or 2 Watts of sideband swing. If this makes it sound worse, you have a bias problem.
If this makes it sound really good, that means the bias is okay, and the distortion is more likely a disabled limiter, or VR12 just set too high.
Of course, if the radio has BOTH one or more wrong bias settings AND the limiter is disabled, this test won't reveal a lot.
Setting VR12 without a 'scope can be done. Crank the mike gain and set the wattmeter for average power. Set VR12 for max modulated power, then turn it slowly back the other way. There will be a drastic "kick-in" point where the wattmeter falls like a rock. Good chance that this setting will be close to correct. A peak meter will show that you didn't turn it down too far.
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